Comment 1 for bug 328250

Also, as described in <https://dev.launchpad.net/DeveloperDocumentation/UserInterfaceChecklist>, the message should not use the words "please" (because it wrongly gives the impression that we really need them to do it) or "below" (because rewriting without that word invariably makes the text shorter).

Referring to subscribing to a mailing list as "updating your Mailing List Subscription preferences" is needlessly pompous, too.